The sun began rising up steadily. A new world for a baby came. A beautiful voice had also came from a big old house. A lovely face made her mum smiled hopefully and said, "Oh..my lovely daughter!"
Year by year she grew naturally. she was big enough to go to school. Even her family was poor, but full of happiness. Everyday she enjoyed with everything around her house_big old house, plants and neighborhoods. The delicious food is fermented-fish for her family. In fruit season she was so happy cuz' every plants gave grains. 11 years went fastly. the old house was sold and her family moved to a small flat. and she was in grade 5th. she had an examination to grade 6th. The first day of her exam on July 05, the sky seemed not pity her. she went to examinable school with her old coat while it was raining. The tests were a bit difficulf for her, but she could do at all. When the time was ended, she went back home on her feet_a kilometre to home. In front of the door, it seemed quieter than usual. Her sister told that our mum went to hospital. had lunch! u had an exam in the evening again. her voice changed suddenly, "she went for what?" her sister teared and said, "our dad was in hospital. he got serious ill this morning." she didn't say anything, just came into the kitchen and had lunch, and though, "I must do my exam well for my dad. did not cry! but the tears rolled on her cheek immediately." After the exam, her sister told, "our dad got well." Everyone in the house was happy. The sun rose up. the second day of the exam came again. she went to school with the promise herself that "my exam must be good for my dad. i must be a strong daughter for my dad." The third day in the evening, July 07, everyone were waiting the father result. Suddenly her mum appeared…
To be continue
wow! is dat a novel??? u write it??? there will be next episode?? haha! if i hav time, i’ll write one interestin story in post in my blog too la…
Noooooo! I hate cliff hangers. I didn’t see the “to be continued” part before reading… I hate waiting to find out what happens. You’re good, you’re really good…
Come on….post new episode….I really want to know how is her dad? come one…..it’s sound very interesting novel…
you wrote it? That ’s good Sony
Mr. V
Yeah! That’s a fantastic story. I really like it.
Anyway, according to the headline of the story, I just think that the result may be not good.
However, I want all families to be happy.
You’re right, when something is easy to get. It’ll be less interesting.
But, please. I’m staying tuned.